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:: 15. Check out the copy-right on: [http://www.passy-muir.com/]. This was not available before 2004. "© 2004-2007 PASSY-MUIR INC. 062806". This actually proves that in 2001 there was no such system available.
:: 17. Resolution would not exist if there would be no state terrorisms in China recognized by the United States government. Anyway this is a well sourced source so it should be present. --[[User:HappyInGeneral|HappyInGeneral]] 10:46, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
Reply to all above:
1. There is no mention of the False Fire video anywhere in the article besides a whole comment on burn treating and tracheotomy. Far from proper use of such a citation.
2. I haven't objected to the usage of posting False Fire, however, the poor credibility of the video will be shown in my edits.
3. Resolution 188 says '''nothing''' of the incident because the only relevant part is that the incident is being reported on the news. It is more like a general statement on FLG in Chinese State media. A better place for it would be in some generic portion of the "Suppression" article or a portion itself.
4. "2004". Wrong, in this case it means that the website was established on 2004, if you read the "history" portion of the website, you'll see that the company started in 1985.
5. Read "3" of my reply.
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